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Moonlight Romeo

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

0 posted 2001-10-04 03:26 PM

Dearest Juliet of my passionate heart,
You are the Moonlight who inspires my art.
My pen flows with the rhythm of your rays.
Since I have found you, I seek not the days.

Sitting here alone beneath your smiling face,
Your light makes my heart beat, my pulse race.
And as I write the whispers of your words,
My ears are filled with the sweetest voice ever heard.

The sun rises Moonlight, and as body seeks sleep,
My eyes close and my soul, left alone, begins to weep.
But with your last words, my Juliet of the Moon,
My spirit knows it will find yours again soon.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

[This message has been edited by Moonlight Romeo (edited 10-04-2001).]

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

1 posted 2001-10-04 04:12 PM

I love the classics, keep writing!

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

2 posted 2001-10-04 04:21 PM

Lovely! Just lovely!

Domzi
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since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

3 posted 2001-10-04 04:57 PM

Awww, this poem
is really sweet!

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

Twilight Myst
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since 2001-10-04

Posts 58
Just A Myst At Twilight

4 posted 2001-10-04 04:59 PM

Sitting here alone beneath your smiling face,
Your light makes my heart beat, my pulse race.
And as I write the whispers of your words,
My ears are filled with the sweetest voice ever heard.
~~~~~~~~~~~

Ohhh my, I adore this piece so much!!

::softly claps::

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-10-04 05:20 PM

Very very romantically done! Enjoyed!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

6 posted 2001-10-04 05:40 PM

I like this so romantic

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

7 posted 2001-10-04 06:21 PM

Very lovely and so romantic! Enjoyed!

warm smiles,
~Marie~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-10-04 06:51 PM

Lovely...James

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

9 posted 2001-10-04 09:17 PM

This is gorgeous!

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

10 posted 2001-10-04 09:56 PM

This is simply lovely. So romantic and sweet and beautifully written

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Siofra

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since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

11 posted 2001-10-04 10:22 PM

Ahh! Our Moonlite Romeo does another beautiful rhyme. I hope that the Moonlight's embrace is feather soft across your heart, Sir.

I am many.

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

12 posted 2001-10-05 09:02 AM

how beautifully done, loved it!!

Charisma

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

13 posted 2001-10-05 06:46 PM

This is a beautiful poem, Romeo!

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

14 posted 2001-10-05 06:56 PM

What a beautifully romantic poem Moonight Romeo ... very tender and loving, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19

Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA

15 posted 2001-10-07 11:42 PM

Romeo & Juliet is one of my favorites and you wrote this so beautifully. I love the way it made me feel.

Heather

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

Moonlight Romeo

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

16 posted 2001-10-09 12:11 PM

Hello, I'm sorry that's it's taken me so long to get back to all of you.

I'm very happy that you like this one. It means a lot to me, as it's for my Moonlight.

Thank you all, you're all wonderful people.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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