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Regret |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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For nineteen years I’ve learned my way through thousands of mistakes I’ve lied awake Trying to make Some sense of my heart aches And in this time I’ve come to learn one truth above the rest You never let Yourself regret When you have tried your best Tonight I find myself again, familiar with the scene Thinking of you Staring into A blank computer screen And though I feel things never came to be just as they should Deep down inside I know I tried Everything that I could So here tonight I dwell on every second that we spent Hiding from light Together tight While hours came and went And though my thoughts are always with you and the day we met I’ll never say In any way Our time, do I regret |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow, Kevin. You are too cool. What a nice poem, full of good thoughts, and well written. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful if you can find yourself without regrets...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a wonderful write Kevin...but don't get your life stuck on a computer at such a young age...there is a very large world out there *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin~ 'You never let Yourself regret When you have tried your best' 'Deep down inside I know I tried Everything that I could' I’ll never say In any way Our time, do I regret' Those are good thoughts to have, my friend~ So good to see you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Kevin, Great poem, and a lesson learned! Well done.  smiles, Marie |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
Hey Kevin I really liked this as a poem, and as a message. It sure made me feel better since I am having another regretful day. |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Well said, well done, Kevin. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Kevin, nicely done! Never to regret....wonderful thoughts! Cindi |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
hi kevin... its been so long. lovely to see your work. this was a great poem. a love with no regrets is the best kind.hold onto the good memories, let go of the rest.take care and again great seeing you!! amy |
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