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Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

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0 posted 2001-10-03 01:47 AM

Sometimes
in the middle of the night
even crickets are quiet
I have the world to myself

clear, starlit sky
the air lies still
not yet too cold

allowing me brief moments
of memory
warm memory

without consequence.

AniKay83
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since 2000-06-28

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Missing Since 1999

1 posted 2001-10-03 01:56 AM

"Without consequence" or conscience? I find the night to be very inspiring. Thanks for the read.

~Krissie

"No one has ever loved
~anyone~
the way
~everyone~
wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-10-03 02:24 AM

Now this is really a beautiful poem. I understand what you are saying,

"allowing me brief moments
of memory
warm memory

without consequence"

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2001-10-03 02:25 AM

no consequense is always a wonderful thought

Tennessee Angel
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since 2000-06-03

Posts 661
Tennessee

4 posted 2001-10-03 08:58 AM

What a nice thought. Just remembering without having to explain yourself to anyone. Yes, I've been there. I love the way you write things that anyone can relate to. Great job!

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-10-03 09:22 AM

another very well constructed and composed piece from your pen. Nicely done...

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

6 posted 2001-10-03 10:23 AM

Duncan,
after reading this, I have to say, you have a beautiful soul....

wonderfully inspiring.

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-10-03 11:49 AM

Duncan~

'Sometimes
in the middle of the night
even crickets are quiet
I have the world to myself'

And then the muses can be heard to whisper such lovely verse~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

8 posted 2001-10-03 02:30 PM

Duncan,
Great poem. Seldom are we without consequence. Wonderful imagery of the night.
Thanks,
Larry C

Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

9 posted 2001-10-04 07:30 PM

My favorite time! I loved this in its entirety. A verse I can repeat to myself over and over and know it by heart.

Sincerely,
Regina

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2001-10-04 08:18 PM

Duncan-
   What lovely thoughts you've penned here.
   Very much enjoyed.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

11 posted 2001-10-04 10:42 PM

Yes, I do the same. Memories are so sweet late at night when all is still. Funny though, how we only remember the good times. But, then again, that's what memories are for

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Balladeer

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12 posted 2001-10-04 10:55 PM

An excellent bit of writing, sir

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