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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-10-02 11:44 AM


...When Eyes Meet Eyes

If you were to meet me
would you be colorblind to my eyes?
Would you notice the shades of you that reflect
while I am watching you watch me?
I wonder if you really know the rhythm of my heart,
why it beats a faster pace when you come into view,
why it stalls when you look at me that way,
how yours hold a magic in them that controls my desire.

For you only, do my eyes speak truth.
No words, just silent truth
when eyes meet eyes.


~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-10-02 11:52 AM


When your eyes meet mine
a rainbow will connect them
we see each other
~*~
my heart must learn yours
then the rhythm will be matched
given the moment

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2001-10-02 11:59 AM


When your eyes meet mine
a rainbow will connect them
we see each other
~*~
my heart must learn yours
then the rhythm will be matched
given the moment

~*~
and I shall disperse my warmth
in iridescent bliss
showering you in the wynter of me
~*~

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-10-02 12:26 PM


Keep this going you two, this is fabulous!

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2001-10-02 12:28 PM


hey you *s...thanks..just  a way to perk up a day hugssss K
sunshinemist
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5 posted 2001-10-02 12:43 PM


Nakd Thoughts, very nice indeed! Enjoyed it.   ~Marie~
Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2001-10-02 12:56 PM


Loved it.  You two should collaborate and add to this.  It would be wonderful.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2001-10-02 01:48 PM


Like this Wynter...James
jwesley
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Spring, Texas
8 posted 2001-10-02 01:52 PM


One of those I wish I had written, from you, again.  Touched me special, my friend.

jwesley

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
9 posted 2001-10-02 02:09 PM


Lady Wynter,
Beautiful.

Duncan
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10 posted 2001-10-02 02:22 PM


Wow...I love this.  Great image of love.

For you only, do my eyes speak truth.
No words, just silent truth
when eyes meet eyes.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
11 posted 2001-10-04 05:45 AM


Thank you Marie *s

Donna,  I am not  good at collaborating, was  just having some  fun adding to his remarks. *s thank you

JamesM...Glad you enjoy my words ~smiles to you.

jwesley...I am sure you have written similar if not better ...thank you for the compliment. hugs


Sy, I can just picture the word beautiful  coming from your lips..thank you

Duncan..another Wow...*s glad I could please you with my words, thank you again.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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