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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Narrow Path A walk through the woods on a cool autumn day nature's sights I do see in awesome display. The sun is shinning a crisp breeze in the air I follow the narrow path that I have made there. My journey the same each time that I go but nature does change as she puts on her show. I hear from above up high in the trees the song of a bird that's sure to please. As I follow the path in the distance I see the sparkling water of a stream that beckons to me. Come closer it calls and see what is there perhaps a deer taking a drink not a worry or care. As I approach the stream on this cool autumn day I see a pair of squirrels happily at play. I watch for a while and continue on my way enjoying nature's beauty this fine cool day. Something catches my sight as I look to see and array of colorful leaves gently falling on me. And there to the left in wonder I see a pair of deer looking straight at me. I slowly approach as they graze the tender grass hoping this view would forever last. My walk down the narrow path is coming to a close my adventure away from all my cares and woes. As I step out from that peaceful place I shall carry a smile upon my face for the joy and the beauty that I have found there will tell a wonderful story that I can share. (c)2001 Marie C. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Very nice! |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Lady in White, thank you very much.  Very nice to meet you too! Marie  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Marie, this is the kind of walk that refreshes the soul! Thank you! Kathleen |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Kay, you are very welcome and thank you for taking the journey with me!! Warm hugs, and smiles Marie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunshineMist~ Just such a lovely glen of serene thoughts~ A wonderful share~ Thanks~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Marge, Just such a lovely glen of serene thoughts~ Thank you very much, that is a lovely comment. Glad that you enjoyed it. warm smiles ~Marie~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well...HELLO THERE, and very nice to meet you too, my friend! My kinda world you've very nicely shown here...wish I was there...jwesley |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Hi JWestly, I am very delighted to share my narrow path with you. I live in the country, lots of beauty around to see. Wish you were here too. Warm smiles, friend ~Marie~ |
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