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Slashed soul
Member

since 2000-03-29

Posts 86
England

0 posted 2001-10-01 01:25 PM

'twas resting stretched across the bed
I realised that within my head
and heart, are pictures, feelings so strong

I will not deny nor hide these deep rooted emotions, emotions that you fuel, by absence,
or presence,'tis fair to compare thee to
an opious drug addictive, pure yet complex
in its entirety.

You cannot see the silvery tears that flow
from my eyes when stories of historic encounters unfold from your lips, Accounts of past-pasts,
I lend my ear most attaintively

Yet see the wonder in your eyes, a box opened, where once 'twas closed, a gift from you to me,
a christmas gift, that only I can see.

The journey home, may be long and fraught with hazards my love, but love surely will guide the
traveller in his quest for life,

For life itself, is nothing without love.

Rich

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-10-01 01:30 PM

So much to give....what indeed do we leave behind?

All good things...I should hope!

Well done!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2001-10-01 02:49 PM

Interesting thoughts. I like this a lot.
Sandra

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-10-01 03:24 PM

Have to agree that life is nothing without love and admiration and desire...James

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2001-10-01 09:05 PM

This is just so beautiful. I'm trying to pick out my favourite lines, but I love them all so much.....Well, maybe these are my most favourite

The journey home, may be long and fraught with hazards my love, but love surely will guide the
traveller in his quest for life

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-10-01 09:07 PM

Oops, had to come back to add this to my library

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Hollowman
Member

since 2001-06-01

Posts 117

6 posted 2001-10-02 10:20 AM

lol- thank you all, and Tracey for some reason....erm. Have a great day!

Richy

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-10-02 12:30 PM

beautiful words...

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

8 posted 2001-10-05 09:52 AM

Wow...

~Tier

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

9 posted 2001-10-05 10:00 AM

This boy is hooked - better stand back folks, the flames are roaring - great write!

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