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sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

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Fl. sunshines early mist

0 posted 2001-10-01 08:56 AM

Memories

My mind drifts back to a happy place
a song, a kiss, a sweet embrace
of treasured memories deep within my soul
of achievements and success to reach that special goal.
I drift upon the sad times too
of sickness, sorrow and things that made me blue
not too long do I stay
for quickly they do pass away.
I remember all those who I have loved
and the special gifts they gave to me
a sense of worth and self-respect
they set an example for me to see.
My mind drifts back to sounds of laughter
to joy and peace
a time where days were endless
and nights that did not cease.
As my mind drifts towards the future
many treasures do await
for the one who has the patience
to quietly sit at the gate.
And when the gate shall open
I will drift on through
to collect all the memories
that are made brand new.

(c)200lMarie C.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-10-01 09:10 AM

Very nice!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-10-01 09:20 AM

Sunshinemist,
A very nice write, I enjoyed the read.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-10-01 09:41 AM

"And when the gate shall open
I will drift on through
to collect all the memories
that are made brand new"

that is so nice, I like that part a lot.

a very "feel good" poem

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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4 posted 2001-10-01 10:03 AM

sunshinemist,

This left me with a smile

I very much enjoyed.

I need a darn quote. *chuckles*

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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5 posted 2001-10-01 10:46 AM

nice

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

6 posted 2001-10-01 10:47 AM

sunshinemist...this is fantastic...great job

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2001-10-01 12:26 PM

Very lovely Marie..and welcome to Passions..
im sure you will enjoy it here...

~Victoria~

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

8 posted 2001-10-01 03:00 PM

Sunshine, thank you very much!

Marie

Seymour, thank you for reading!

Marie

Sea, thank you so much

I love feel good poems.

Marie

Rose Petals, thank you kindly, so glad that you enjoyed it.

Marie

Vanda, thank you kindly.

Marie

Alan, thank you for your wonderful comments!

Marie

Victoria, thank you for reading and for the very warm welcome.

Marie

Warm smiles, and happy fall days to all of you!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2001-10-01 06:06 PM

I do love this, such a hopeful outcome, of erasing the past with a future that is better.
Peace.
Sandra

arthur
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

10 posted 2001-10-01 06:46 PM

i enjoyed thisvery much my dear
Thank you for posting it
Arthur

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

11 posted 2001-10-01 07:02 PM

Sandra, Thank you very much. I love peace at the end too. Peace and smiles to you.

~Marie~

Arthur, Thank you kindly for reading. It is also very nice to meet you.

Warms smiles,
~Marie

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