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Open Poetry #16

What makes me love you?

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-09-30 09:46 AM

Is it your smile?
Is it your walk?
Is it our years together
that makes me love you.
Your hand in mine
the warmth we crave
The sleepless nights
when you're not there
When you call my name
my heart still flutters
No other man
I can love like you
Still after all this time
I look forward
to being with you

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2001-09-30 09:48 AM

Nicely done, it's so hard to define, why that one person will make us feel so much.
Sandra

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2001-09-30 09:49 AM

I like this. Very good. I ask myself this question, alot.

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

3 posted 2001-09-30 11:00 AM

Walker, Love over time, a rare beauty indeed. I loved it! Thank you.

~Marie~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-09-30 01:37 PM

do we really have to answer this question??

great job my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

5 posted 2001-09-30 01:41 PM

Tender and lovely.....

May you always have the joy of such love..

Thank you
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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2001-09-30 01:52 PM

Better than any Hallmark card or Kodak moment. You have the real, Love.

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

7 posted 2001-09-30 02:07 PM

Very nice!

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

8 posted 2001-09-30 03:40 PM

Walker

It is all of those things and more, much more. Nicely done.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2001-09-30 05:40 PM

nice

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

10 posted 2001-10-01 12:25 PM

Still after all this time
I look forward
to being with you

I know exactly what you mean. Sometimes love is most real in the understatement of small moments.

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