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His Destination In Life
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His Destination In Life |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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His Destination In Life He as a new playground What more can I say His ego he had to build So he went off to play My heart he destroys A friend I shall remain He went feeding his ego He’s off playing again Flirting more his style Serious he cannot be Wonder if other friends Feel the same as me I am that close friend But what of his wife Does he ever consider His destination in life Hope©2001 |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
theres a country song about "ordinary life"...this sounds much like that song...he takes for granted his ordinary life..yet, after he leaves she is happy to find that she and the kid "get by" ok in their ordinary life.. ....hopefully, soon he'll figure out that ordinary life is not a bad thing...  very nice write.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks for replying Dgvarner yes I guess with some , its greed want a huge ego feed in other words , want their cake and eat it too Hopw |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Ouch, this one hurts. Wow, these are very interesting thoughts. They never think about what happens if they are caught or they are so wrapped up in themselves to care, I'm not sure which it is. Much truth here. Thanks for sharing this. All writing comes |
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