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Topheth
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since 2001-09-08
Posts 297
Texas

0 posted 2001-09-28 11:44 PM



Morning breaks
wide with smiles
that pour from your lips
onto my sleepy eyes

and warm sunshine
falls with your hand
upon my shoulder.

'Good morning,'
your voice like songbirds
outside the glowing bedroom
window.

Today
and all is well
with me.

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with you
1 posted 2001-09-28 11:48 PM


"onto my sleepy eyes"


good lord Jeph, your eyes are so beautiful, thinking of them sleepy kills me LOL

(sorry)   I like this very much, it's so sweet. All over your poetry is wonderful  

Dee
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
2 posted 2001-09-28 11:51 PM


Mmmm...nice thoughts.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
3 posted 2001-09-29 01:04 AM



Awwww    what a lovely way to start the day.  

Hugs,
~Krista  

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-09-29 09:02 AM


Oh those eyes!  There they are again....
Good poem, enjoyed.  


~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
5 posted 2001-09-29 09:17 AM


Topheth, sounds like you are one lucky man indeed, many would wish for what you have, keep your love close and nurture your bud of kindness.

Loved the words and the read.

Sincerely Rick

Ps, hope you shared these words with the one of whom you speak.

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
6 posted 2001-09-29 10:00 PM


This is a breath of fresh sunshine!! Lucky guy, lucky girl.. A wonderful reminder that love still lives.
Joie de Vivre
Junior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 21
USA
7 posted 2001-09-29 11:54 PM


I have decided
from reading
a few of your works tonight
that you are
definitely
a lover
and a fighter


good morning
or is it now
night?

*in this, I give you only what I believe
to be true; I am living, I am breathing, I am seeking your love endlessly*

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