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Hollowman
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0 posted 2001-09-19 05:20 PM




The summer breeze, the autumn sky
a whisp of smoke across my eyes
lazily I listen to nothingness

'twas a time to recall the moments of past
a time when I thought happyness would last
It faded as the sun bedded down for the night
it faded to a distant, dim light

Of all the the thoughts I hold
and all the stories I have told
lies inside, my thoughts reside
in me

Many things have happened
many borders crossed in hope of a world
that welcomes my being
alas my quest with no end is endless
in its entirity

Ponder yes, a future? maybe so
time? relentlessly ticks its tock
racing to demise, a date not fixed
in my mind.


Richy

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1 posted 2001-09-19 06:57 PM




Of all the the thoughts I hold
and all the stories I have told
lies inside, my thoughts reside
in me

Many things have happened
many borders crossed in hope of a world
that welcomes my being
alas my quest with no end is endless
in its entirity

Ponder yes, a future? maybe so
time? relentlessly ticks its tock
racing to demise, a date not fixed
in my mind.

-------------------------

This gave me a dark bitter feeling ...

But there is light at the end of the tunnel...

Thank you
*********************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

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2 posted 2001-09-19 07:22 PM


sometimes, those thoughts can consume us. . .

we must look for the light. . . well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-09-20 01:18 AM


HollowMan~

'Ponder yes, a future? maybe so'

Oh, yes ... there IS a future~
Each of us must make sure of that~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

vlraynes
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4 posted 2001-09-23 02:42 PM



Hollowman-
   I agree with Marge...we MUST go on, and
   ensure that there IS a future, and that
   it will be a good one!
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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