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Hollowman
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0 posted 2001-09-26 02:04 PM



Touch thy face with hands of grace
let words fall lazily from your lips
Gaze deeply into my eyes my love
fall into my abyss

Of all the angels that sweep the skies
and look down upon my troubled life
truly you must of lost your wings
to save me from this human strife

The softness of your skin so pure
the corners of your mouth demure
wake me from this haze
Inspiration, love, tenderness
will you hold me to the end my days

...................................


Richy


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1 posted 2001-09-26 02:17 PM



Ah, how could one not?  Well done, Sir!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-09-26 02:20 PM


Oh *sigh*...just lovely.


~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-09-26 03:35 PM


Inspiration..life..tenderness....Very nice indeed...James
Zinsser
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Calif.
4 posted 2001-09-26 03:38 PM


Oh, I like this very much....
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