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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2001-09-26 08:01 AM



LOVING YOU

(for my David whose love is my inspiration)


L  osing myself in your eyes
O  blivious to everything but you
V  isions of our future in my heart
I   nviting you into my very being
N  ever doubting the love I have
G  rowing in my heart for you.

Y  earning to be with you always
O  verjoyed that you are part of my life
U  nderstanding how blessed I am.




TaraB

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 09-26-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-09-26 08:11 AM


Ahhhhhhhhhh, how sweet, you obviously love this person very much . What a lovely little acrostic .
Thankyou .
L.of.L. Tom .

'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

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2 posted 2001-09-26 08:14 AM


angelswing - Thank you.  And yes I do love him, very very much
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3 posted 2001-09-26 10:22 AM


RP~   this is sooooooo sweet  tender and very loving  
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4 posted 2001-09-26 10:49 AM


Oh my! This is really good. I really like it.
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5 posted 2001-09-26 01:52 PM


Hi Rosepetals,

This is so lovely, it sounds like you truely have a soul mate,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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6 posted 2001-09-26 02:05 PM


Tara,

Very nice work here.  He's a lucky guy.  

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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7 posted 2001-09-26 02:28 PM


I will spend my whole life through loving you...James
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8 posted 2001-09-26 06:11 PM


i am a lucky guy  
honey, what can i say except to make this reply:

I lose countless moments

L ooking into your heart
O nly you inspire me;
V igorously shaking me out of
E gregious melancholy,

Y elling at me to go
O n when i'm ready to quit;
U ntil i found you, i

T hought the world
O pen desert, empty:
O nly your love feeds my spirit.

So there.
-Napalm

I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!
"Why do i smell something burning?!?"
I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!

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9 posted 2001-09-26 07:30 PM


SEA - Thanks for stopping in... I'm glad you liked it  

Smartchick - Thank you for coming in and responding  

Cerenity - I believe I have. Thank you for visiting.

Auguste - Trust me when I say that I am the lucky one.  Thank you for stopping in

JamesMichael - What a sweet and tender writer you are. Thank you.

Dave -   I can't even think of what to say to you. My mind is at a loss.. see what ya do to me? Love you dear...always


TaraB

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 09-26-2001).]

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