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Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06
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California, USA

0 posted 2001-11-11 10:50 PM


If loved by you
Dream awakened at last
From slumbering empty nights
No tears to cry

Except in true joy
My heart leaping happily
Skipping along the way
Jumping over lonely beats

Truly seeing only you
Sadness exiled to past
As we forever embrace
Drowning in pure ecstasy

When thinking of us
No shadow dimming hope
Just brightly lit future
Held entwined in hands
Never to seperate again



© Copyright 2001 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
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1 posted 2001-11-11 11:14 PM


Absolutely wonderful. You know how I love it when you write romance and this poem is just another example of why I do. Simply beautiful, Sir Robert. I love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-11-11 11:26 PM


I bow to you Sir Robert!
Very well spoken sire.
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Larry C
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since 2001-09-10
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3 posted 2001-11-12 12:09 PM


Sir Robert,
I must say you are consistent at this stuff...and good!  

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04
Posts 981
OK, USA
4 posted 2001-11-12 10:20 PM


Very well written.I enjoyed it.
Peaches

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