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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-11-10 04:23 PM


The lace curtain that hangs by the window
Billows gracefully in the warm Summer breeze
As we lay here beside one another
With you I feel so very much at ease

The subtle scent of gardenia
So heavenly is its perfume
A cloud of this beautiful fragrance
Floats through the air around the room

My gaze begins to linger
On your face that's so divine
In this early morning sunlight
How your brilliant blue eyes shine

The aroma of freshly brewed coffee
With eggs and bacon I've made for two
On the balcony you and I will sit
As we admire the spectacular view

From here we look out over the ocean
As far as the eye can see
There is certainly no better place
You and I could possibly be

We'll walk hand in hand by the water
As the sun melts slowly over the sea
I'll succumb to your charms under the moonlight
As towards heaven your love will transport me

Suetang

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1 posted 2001-11-10 04:30 PM




(big hugggsssssss) I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) There's nothing like a nice walk on the beach, holding the hand of the one you love, in the morning at sunrise, kissing against the bright sun. (big hugggsssss) You are such a sweet romantic, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-11-10 05:07 PM


very excellent expression of a love so
strong....BTW...I like to cook like that
too...just don't have the view..

Also...please send me one of the poems
that you sent before...I accidently
deleted them....sorry.

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
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3 posted 2001-11-11 01:01 PM


awww that one was REALLY good.. sounds like you have a nice place.. a good view.. by the shore.. thats ALL YOU NEED!!!
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