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Her Rainbow............
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Her Rainbow............ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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And when the rain stopped The dawn broke free In the early light Up here on my mountain In the tender hours I thought of you As the rainbow stretched And kissed the day new. ~SEA~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
As the rainbow stretched And kissed the day new. Oh SEA!!! This is beautiful...just lovely. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a very soft and romantic image SEA... you keep these up I am gonna fall for you... ( smiling) |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Lovely words, Sea, and so romantic.... God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Keep it up. I want to see the Captain lose his footing... |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
kissed the day new...isn't it lovely after a rain. Beautiful poem my friend. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
very very pretty May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Just lovely. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
stretch out my friend. . . well done. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
SEA, So much tenderness is felt with this short lovely poem I loved it... like I always do TaraB |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
I can feel the dampness and see the color Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Enchantress~ thank you for that Cpat~ aren't you a sweet one?!  thank you so much Elizabeth~ thank you Sunshine~ we can hope  RSEvans~ yes, this morning was beautiful thank you AWC~ thanks! Seymour~ thank you Sven~ thank you RP~ I'm happy you liked this thanks Rusty~ warm fuzzies thank you ~SEA "when I catch my breath, it's you I breathe" ~Michelle Branch~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~  Your thoughts as lovely as the rainbow stretching~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
What a lovely picture you've painted for us. Nature has so much of these goodies to share with us, we just have to look Beautiful poem of a beautiful moment. Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now this was simply beautiful Sea, I loved it. ~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
colorful rainbow the sign of God's promise brings wonderful thoughts |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
don't we all need these kinds of thoughts right now! I know I'm sick and tired of hiding in shadows waiting for gloom and doom...I say LIVE Kathleen |
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