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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Somewhere…. Somewhere in a memory there is a touch a touch that warms and chills in it’s caress there is a kiss a kiss so soft yet intense with passion somewhere in a memory there is a whispered breath shared between two one which is heard in volumes there is a love gentle and slow yet fierce with desire somewhere in a memory the promise of forever leaves and a dying heart lives in longing… achildsheart 11-09-01 this woman's soul drowned in the shallow waters of a man's heart. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautiful and tender write of loving memories. Well written AWC... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 11-09-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This....suits your pen name very well.... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
it certainly does suit your pen name, it's soft and tender...... Kathleen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AWhispersCaress~ I find this so lovely~ 'somewhere in a memory there is a whispered breath shared between two one which is heard in volumes' I know that memory, that breath, that sharing~ Thank you for putting it so poetically~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Annie, this is beautiful. Simply beautiful. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Annie, you are such a romantic! (sigh) Soft but passionate, sweet but enticing! Your words of love always have my heart swooning to the beauty of them! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Well, I have to say I wasn't sure how well this would go over. There are so many contradictions I just wasn't very sure about it. I thank each of you for the very generous replies. Thanks..... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi, to bad this poem is all the way over in the closed forum. I didn't see it before Interlopers poem, and I think it is very good, says much of the way we feel about memories. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I am so pleased I didn't miss this one this morning! Lovely yet sadly haunting. Hugs, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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