Going The Extra Miles ( Additional Verse )

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Going The Extra Miles ( Additional Verse )

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

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0 posted 2001-09-19 07:34 AM

Going The Extra Miles

They sink when empty
Heart’s need a re- fill
Conquer over gloom
With love and goodwill

With hug or handclasp
Warm heart and soul
If when broken apart
Assist back to whole

Maintain the support
Always keep in mind
Continue the sharing
Being gentle and kind

Make it a daily habit
Lifting the downcast
Firm, fixed ,resolute
In friendship steadfast

Going the extra miles
Along sea and shore
In cherishing forever
Love helps to restore

Heart’s if called upon
Let goodness prevail
Fill where its needed
So love will never fail
Hope ©2001

Kit McCallum

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1 posted 2001-09-19 07:36 AM

A lovely piece filled with warmth and inspiration Hope, very nicely done.

Best wishes,
/Kit

HopeS
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Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2001-09-19 09:12 AM

A big huge thanks to you Kit
for your kind reply
Hope

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2001-09-19 11:37 AM

It pays to go that extra mile...especially in friendships.
thanks Hope for sharing your thoughts.

Maureen

HopeS
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4 posted 2001-09-19 11:50 AM

Thanks for your kind reply Maureen ,
yes especially in these now troubled times
Hope

Masked Intruder

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5 posted 2001-09-19 01:55 PM

I like the new verse, definitely adds

vlraynes
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6 posted 2001-09-23 01:39 PM

HopeS-
  Enjoyed these thoughts.
  Hugs,
  ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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