Nature's Water Show A Sonnet

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SEA

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0 posted 2001-09-24 08:55 PM

All at once it happened, rain fell for me
as the pitter patter, of rain can be
just a small tickle, of tiny trickle
light and slight, of water that is fickle

falling in places, scarcely out of reach
yet finding path, to my heart’s private beach
scent of Heaven reaching, the Earth below
step outside to watch, Nature’s water show

landscape wet with hit and miss, drip of drop
oh how I wish this weather, wouldn’t stop
soaking in my senses, joy overflow
with every breath I pray, “rain please don’t slow”

thick grey clouds give a promise, there’ll be more
of the peaceful rain that I do adore

~SEA~

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-09-24 09:00 PM

All at once it happened, rain fell for me
as the pitter patter, of rain can be
just a small tickle, of tiny trickle
light and slight, of water that is fickle

SEA, I am so happy it rained for you!
I know how much you love it....and it does pitter patter doesn't it?

~Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

SEA

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2 posted 2001-09-24 09:02 PM

thank you!! I went outside and breathed in as deep as I could, and I thanked God for this gift

now I just hope those clouds follow through with their promise

Honeybee
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3 posted 2001-09-24 09:03 PM

I, too, love the calm, hypnotizing sound of rain, and I love this sonnet!

Well done!~

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

SEA

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4 posted 2001-09-24 09:05 PM

thank you Melissa, you always say the nicest things

Marge Tindal

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5 posted 2001-09-24 10:57 PM

SEA~
Girlie ... you breathe the rain in poetic drizzle~
Beautifully done ... just beautifully done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Chelsea~
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6 posted 2001-09-24 11:31 PM

SEA,

what a great sonnet,
it's so lively and
beautiful

SEA

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7 posted 2001-09-24 11:47 PM

thank you Marge....it makes me all drippy LOL

Chelsea~ thank you, the rain does tend to inspire

~SEA

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8 posted 2001-09-25 10:02 AM

falling in places, scarcely out of reach
yet finding path, to my heart’s private beach
scent of Heaven reaching, the Earth below
step outside to watch, Nature’s water show

to use a much over used word, but it sure fits awe-some.....don't look it up in the dictionary...we east Texans have a few words that are not in there *S*....it means wonderful.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

SEA

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9 posted 2001-09-25 01:45 PM

thank you Rusty

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