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Love of a Lifetime
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Love of a Lifetime |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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I've spent my whole life searching for a woman whose love would be true But I honestly didn't think that kind of love was meant for me, until I met you Now my days are filled with a happiness within I long for the day when our life together will begin You light up my life, you bring love to my each and every day I reach out my hand to you, and pray that you always stay I've never loved anyone the way I love you my dear sweetheart Not sure when I fell for you, perhaps from the start I close my eyes as I anticipate your sweet kiss To feel your arms around me would bring me such bliss One day this won't be just a dream, it will come to pass I'll feel your love beside me, finally at long last On that fateful day with tears falling from my eyes I'll thank the Lord above, as I raise my head to the skies We've got a lot of living, and a lot of loving to do too Forever and always, I shall ALWAYS love you Put your hand in mine, trust in what we share I'll always pick you up, be around to always care Your love snuck up on me, out of the clear blue When I look inside my heart, staring back is you I thought I was in love before, I guess it was based on a fantasy For I didn't feel true love, till your love touched me Please know these words are true, they represent how I feel The love inside this heart, is sincere and very real Through all the years to come, by your side is where I want to be Want to share with you each day, feel our love for eternity I know they say all things must end, that nothing can last forever But even in this world beyond, you and I will remain together Our love was destined from the beginning, it was written in the stars above I honestly feel our love has a blessing from the Lord above The path may be long, there will be times we might feel sad and blue But I make this solemn vow for as long as I shall live...I will love you. "I could kiss you in the rain forever. Turn all of your pain to pleasure Fill up your days with sunlight, make the passion last every night" [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 11-04-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!A beautiful love poem. You have written from your heart and created a masterpiece filled with the beauty of the love you feel for her. Well done.   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
*sigh*. This is gorgeous Amy. You write your feelings so well. You are both very lucky to have found each other. This love truly sounds like heaven on earth. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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BldWhtRose Junior Member
since 2001-09-24
Posts 38Alabama USA |
This is one lucky woman...... Hope she realizes it ! Best Wishes.....and Congratulations for a well written dedication to the one you love !  [This message has been edited by BldWhtRose (edited 11-04-2001).] |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
"Our love was destined from the beginning, it was written in the stars above" I really really love this line!! So romantic... So glad you've found true love! ^.^ If only we could read what's written in the stars, it'd save us a lot of trouble searching for the one... |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
This love sounds beautiful, and that's one lucky woman. Do or die! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful to read you again Amy! This is such a beautiful and tender piece ... full of heartfelt emotion and anticipation. Much enjoyed! Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Amy, How beautiful this is! Such love and a longing to be with the one you love... something I can definately relate to. I very much liked this poem Hugs, Tara |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Amy..I love this. It is a wonderful statement from a loving heart..I hope it is always this way for you. alan |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
*sigh* I used to feel this way about someone. Arg...it's true what they say about some things not lasting forever. Oh well... I sincerely hope it all works out for you. Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
Absolutely beautiful. I know I searched for my love of a lifetime for, well my whole life. I found him, and that makes it all worth the wait. *SMILE* "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Could it be fate? Yes, I think so....this is tender and beautiful..... |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
do a little dance... make a little love... ; ) what a lucky little lady that you are dreaming of! |
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