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songstress51
Junior Member

since 2001-09-15

Posts 17
Anytown, USA

0 posted 2001-09-24 08:33 PM

I wrote this in 1990...seems fitting to the world we live in today even more...

If we could see the world
through a childs eyes
life would be uncomplicated
by grownup lies
we'd play ring around the rosey
to the homeless' cries

and the world would be
a better place to live
those most fortunate
would somehow learn to give
we'd all smile and join our hands
and hold them high
while a rainbow shows right through
the troubled sky
if we could see the world
through a childs eyes

If we could change the world
I think it best, be wise
before obliteration
reeks the harvest dry
we can call for peace and freedom
now we must try

to make earth our home
a better place to live
those most fortunate
would somehow learn to give
we'd all smile and join our hands
and hold them high
while a rainbow shows right through
the troubled sky

to make earth our home
a better place to live
those most fortunate
would somehow learn to give
we'd all smile and join our hands
and hold them high
while a rainbow shows right through
the troubled sky
if we could see the world
through a childs eyes...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-09-24 08:42 PM

to make earth our home
a better place to live
those most fortunate
would somehow learn to give
we'd all smile and join our hands
and hold them high
while a rainbow shows right through
the troubled sky
if we could see the world
through a childs eyes...

How very very true Songstress...enjoyed!!
Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-09-24 08:53 PM

Songstress~
Yes, yes !
Very applicable~
Enjoyed the thoughts~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2001-09-24 08:54 PM

Such a lovely thought, if only!

Well expressed~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2001-09-27 01:49 AM

songstress-
   YES!! This is wonderful, and so true!
   Thanks for sharing this with us.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

5 posted 2001-10-02 02:53 AM

i knew i would enjoy the poem before i clicked on the thread

i was right..thank you for sharing...

this reminds me of the song "heal the world" by MJ...

and yup, we ought to try!

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

6 posted 2001-10-02 03:26 AM

Certainly bears repeating, especially when it is said so well. Thank for the return engagement. A well needed reminder in times like these.
Larry C

Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c

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