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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-11-02 11:45 AM


If this offends any reader, please have the courtesy to
POST YOUR COMMENT
and send me an Email.  

I AM capable of editing almost anything.


sweet Tennessee gal
mountain born an’ bred she is
with thirteen brothers
~*~
we met at the falls
that feed the old fishin’ hole
down in the holler
~*~
split rail fences thar
to set on an’ talk and dream
‘til the brothers come
~*~
very protective
very many an’ big, too
we must avoid them
~*~
we found this nice place
at the end of the holler
whar the bluegrass grows
~*~
I stole me a kiss
one thing led to another
an’ we were kissin’
~*~
we were explorin’
air breath comin’ in short gasps
between air kisses
~*~
air hands so busy
we were lost in each other
here came her brothers
~*~
well, she got buttoned
so did I as fast as fire
an’ lit outta thar

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
The Lady of Shallot
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1 posted 2001-11-02 11:50 AM


didn't offend me, makes you seem all the more taller with every post!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2001-11-02 11:50 AM


Absolutely loved this!!  Regina will love it too.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

SEA
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with you
3 posted 2001-11-02 11:54 AM


niiiiiiiiiiice....I like,I like  
Interloper
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4 posted 2001-11-02 12:00 PM


Lady of Shallot~
Gosh.  D'ya think I could get taller?  I am the runt of the family at only 6'4"

Gentle Spirit ~
Thank you ... and I hope she does  

SEA ~
Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnx  


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-02-2001).]

SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet
5 posted 2001-11-02 12:19 PM



hehehe   a giggle and a half for this one!  Was Larry in with the pack of brothers?  We need a third party to tell us the truth!

Hugs,
~Krista

Enchantress
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6 posted 2001-11-02 12:22 PM


Interloper...this was very very tame...lol.
Enjoyed this one as I have the others tall dude!  Carry on.....

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Startime
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7 posted 2001-11-02 03:04 PM


LOL *giggling* Oh gosh....I just can't seem to get enough of these..."Feet do you duty, your body's in danger" a favorite saying of my father and here it fits perfectly.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SmartChick
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8 posted 2001-11-02 03:57 PM


Oh no! You sure do have alot of bad luck.
Decaflame
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9 posted 2001-11-02 04:06 PM



Is your luck all bad?  These are too clever!

Interloper
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10 posted 2001-11-02 04:29 PM


Krista ~
I think Larry told on us.  I'll fix his wagon!

enchantress ~
OK, I can live with tame  

Startime ~
Your daddy was a wise man  

SmartChick ~
If it weren't for bad luck I'd have no luck at all  

Deca ~
Well, if I'm so clever how come I don't get to finish.  Heck, I really don't even get started good.  I could blame lunatic and Sunshine for the blue moon.


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-02-2001).]

rwood
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11 posted 2001-11-02 06:56 PM


Whoowwweeee!!! I reckon I got news for you...I been waitin on this muddy bank for 2 years for you to come round...Now I got me a Man!!!! Brother or no brother...I can whip em' and I have legs as long as two counties and you ain't goin no where!...But I'll play along...for the fun of it!   Been practicin' on my mud wrestlin' technique...I bet you won't get far!   Big Smooch for you!!! Love it! Oh Feller O'Mine!
Sincerely,
Regina

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Gaia
12 posted 2001-11-02 07:05 PM


LOL, this is making my day...once again. Regina ain't gonna let no durn bros stop her, oh no.
walker
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13 posted 2001-11-02 07:05 PM


I think that by now you have a price tag, 13 brothers. What's next jealous boyfriend?? Too funny.
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