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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-09-24 03:44 PM


Oh miracle of God above
I've found a little slice of love
A voice of past returned to me
the outcome, somewhat left to see.

I reached and he reached in return
our love not gone, though much to learn
this one more time I'll try to give
and show us both why we still live.

A magic man told me today
an owls nature is my way
with hummingbird another part
and he, the eagle of my heart.

Predicted resolution true
and happiness that may shine through
so I am taking heart in hand
to offer once more to this man.

And should he crush it yet again
I'll know enough to let it end.
But maybe magic becomes real
then worth past pain, to truly feel.

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-09-24 03:54 PM


I believe there is a reason why friends and lovers come around and sometimes it is not over exactly when we think it is...we just have to make sure our expectations are in the right place...James
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2 posted 2001-09-24 03:56 PM


Lovely poem and hope your dreams come true!

Betty Lou Hebert

RSEvans
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3 posted 2001-09-24 04:02 PM


If love's embrace you finally find,
Bear this warning still in mind
For that which once was lost then found
That one time ran you into the ground
Can carry you to lofty heights,
But drop you when its not so right.
Protect your heart, oh poetess,
So that I told you so don't redress
And keep your heart now safe and sound
Until true love is finally found.

Best of Luck on love regained, hope it works out better than the last time.  Very nice read.

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4 posted 2001-09-24 04:45 PM


lovely... hope you find the love you are looking for...


Sven
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5 posted 2001-09-24 08:15 PM


here's hoping Sandra. . .

wonderfully done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
6 posted 2001-09-24 08:18 PM


Thanks for all the support, everyone..
I need all the positive thoughts just to get on a plane..
Sandra

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7 posted 2001-09-24 08:34 PM


I do hope this time around all will go well for you and he.  Lovely poem!
To the top...it goes, as if by magic!
Poof!  
Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

songstress51
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8 posted 2001-09-24 08:38 PM


my wish is that you find love tenfold your expectations...


RSWells
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9 posted 2001-09-24 08:43 PM


I hope returning works for you, it never has for me,
I've poked around Love's residue, and could no ember see.

Tracey
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10 posted 2001-09-24 10:15 PM


Lovely poem. My fingers are crossed that all will work out. Good luck

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2001-09-25 02:47 AM


CatalinaMoon~
Plane ?  You don't need a plane !
Sounds to me like you're flying high enough
to just spread your wings and take off~
Best to you, gal~
Go for it ...
~*Marge*~

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SmittenKitten
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12 posted 2001-09-25 02:58 AM



Go for it girl!    "what ifs" are not fun at all.  

Best of luck to you....and hugs   for support.
~Krista  

wayoutwalt
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13 posted 2001-09-25 03:30 AM


Oh it's tricky I know that for sure. Nice write.
Kit McCallum
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14 posted 2001-09-25 06:47 AM


Wonderful Sandra! This shows that we can find our hearts and inspiration again ... thank you for this positive and uplifting read this morning, much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

rwood
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15 posted 2001-09-26 08:39 PM


Just be your self, and be true to yourself and I hope all falls into beautiful place! Very elegantly written Sandra! Best wishes!

Sincerely,
Regina

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