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Hollowman
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since 2001-06-01
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0 posted 2001-09-24 03:38 PM


Sing a song of sixpence my heart so full of trust
for and twenty chainsaws convert this into dust
Once my heart was open, to be sealed with a ring
no all that lies inside my chest
does not feel a thing.

My queen was in her counting house
counting all my money, I had this odd feeling
it was kinda funny
The birds of love shot dead
the cuckoo flown far west
Once again an open road, time to take a rest.

ho-hum!
© Copyright 2001 Richard Pardoe - All Rights Reserved
illusion
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since 2001-06-19
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1 posted 2001-09-24 05:16 PM

I wish I didn't feel a thing. I like this - I can definitely relate.
Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
2 posted 2001-09-24 09:52 PM

Oh this is so cute. A light rendering of an otherwise dark subject. I love it. I'm going back now to read it again.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?
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