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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-09-24 02:13 PM



I was with you in that stadion
just separated by a tv. screen
and I saw this bond of people
as we never have been seen

Joined together all religions
each of them in their own way
praying to one God they did
Yes it really happened this day

Yet one moment I felt sadness
seeing how easy this should be
that it took place after disaster
that it took this horrible tragedy

But the same time I felt happy
that this happened now and here
for it showed this united feeling
and no religion should one fear

Cause in all the different cultures
that most are good you must admit
one must not condemn all creatures
for what a few bad persons did

I don't know if they will succeed
to wipe out evil from this earth
maybe evil should be brainwashed
to the believe that lifes have worth

To the believe that different opinions
should be talked about with respect
In the name of the God one believes in
not a single life should be wrecked



[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 09-24-2001).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2001-09-24 02:19 PM


Titia,
This was well crafted and I enjoyed the read.

Decaflame
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2 posted 2001-09-24 02:36 PM



Thank you for this, Titia!

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3 posted 2001-09-24 06:18 PM


Titia~
As I watched that same beautiful gathering of unity ...
I thought of those around the world who might be joining us ...
I'm glad to know you were able to see and feel the blessings~

Thank you, sweetie~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2001-09-24 07:04 PM


The world is so small these days.  how can we hate?  Joyce
Duncan
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5 posted 2001-09-25 12:14 PM


I'm not sure exactly which moment you're referring to, there have been several, but I know that my reaction as I watched the Service at the National Cathedral felt very much as you described.  It is terrible that it took a tradegy for a varied group of believers to get together like that...but at least they did get together.  It was a powerful moment as is your poem.  Thank you, Titia.
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6 posted 2001-09-25 01:18 AM


Ah Titia, you heart is as big as Texas, thank you for sending your lovely poem to me.  I too watched most of the services and it touched my heart as well that all denominations are coming together as one under God for a common cause.  Well done!

~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly

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7 posted 2001-09-25 01:48 AM


It seem as if your kind heart is everywhere. What a wonderful soul you have , and you are a true friend of humanity.
Titia Geertman
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8 posted 2001-09-26 04:54 PM


Thank you my dear friends, though I'm not a religious believer, I felt very connected with all the people overthere.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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