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RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

0 posted 2001-09-24 11:31 AM


Two souls entwined, melded as one
  Beneath the hood of setting sun
As darkness falls, our hearts alight
  With the coming of the night.
You are my muse, my beautiful love
  Sent to me from up above.
Angelic vision of God's own grace
  Beautiful body, mind and face.
I am your Knight, your quested one
  Seeking your love, second to none.
Together we are a perfect pair
  None could even dare to compare.
We stand alone, and up above
  Others who are merely in love.
Bear me, lover, into your arms
  Hold me close in your loving charms.
Keep me ever close to thee
  As I will keep you close to me.

With Love,
Your Knight

Knight of the Rose.

© Copyright 2001 Rob Evans - All Rights Reserved
NightShadow
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since 2001-09-04
Posts 127
New Jersey
1 posted 2001-09-24 11:34 AM


I almost don't know what to say   You have done it again my Knight.. stole my heart with your words.. love ya  

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-09-24 11:41 AM


Oh how beautiful....a Knight to his Muse, with such love and conviction.  Enjoyed with a sigh!!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
3 posted 2001-09-24 01:01 PM




I am your Knight, your quested one
  Seeking your love, second to none.
Together we are a perfect pair
  None could even dare to compare.
We stand alone, and up above
  Others who are merely in love.
Bear me, lover, into your arms
  Hold me close in your loving charms.
Keep me ever close to thee
  As I will keep you close to me.

=========================

Wow....just sooooo romantically beautiful.
You have gently touched my heart with this....and made it sigh....

Thank you
*******************************

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2001-09-24 02:16 PM


RSEvans,
Well done, enjoyed the read.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
5 posted 2001-09-24 07:33 PM



oh my!  This is B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L!  

Wonderfully expressed!

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Sinister Handed
Member
since 2001-08-05
Posts 58

6 posted 2001-09-25 03:28 AM


Very nicely done.
True love is an amazing thing.

SmittenKitten
Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
7 posted 2001-09-25 03:37 AM


Awww...another beautiful love poem by you that makes my heart sigh   True love suits you well.

Hugs,
~Krista  

Cpat Hair
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Posts 11793

8 posted 2001-09-25 08:27 AM


very nice... an enjoyable romantic read...


SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
9 posted 2001-09-25 10:44 AM


oh, I like this. Very well written. Enjoyed reading it.
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
10 posted 2001-09-25 10:55 AM



Lovely!

RSEvans
Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
11 posted 2001-09-25 10:58 AM


Night Shadow: What can I say...you inspire me

Enchantress, MEM, Seymour, SH: thanks

Krista: a fan?

CH, SC Thanks

Sunshine: Glad you liked it.

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
12 posted 2001-09-25 11:58 AM


This is cool. Keep writing yuh.
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

13 posted 2001-09-25 02:13 PM


Oh I am so glad I came back to read today!  This is lovely.  Well done.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Dee
Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
14 posted 2001-09-25 06:55 PM


Rob, so romantic, so beautiful. You really touched my heart with this, I loved it. Your muse is a lucky girl to have this written for her.
I want a knight to write for me now  

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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