Just for Enchantress . . . Continuing challenge #4 . . . Teasing

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Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-10-30 03:47 PM

oh my Enchantress
she teases me as she says
we should go further
~*~
our lips are on fire
hearts pounding, racing wildly
hands tearing at clothes
~*~
anticipation
the pond stands invitingly
together we run
~*~
the picnic ruined
we will try another time
who knew there’d be ants

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 10-30-2001).]

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2001-10-30 03:50 PM

ROFL.....oh Interloper.....ants???!!!! Poor Enchantress having waited so long to picnic with you. Well done!!

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2001-10-30 04:28 PM

You big meanie! She has waited so long for this interlude - and all she got was ants in her pants?

and so the challenge begins and this is a lot of fun! Well done!

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2001-10-30 05:12 PM

Hehehe you busy busy man....

Nice

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

4 posted 2001-10-30 06:38 PM

Ants?
You gave her ants?
LOL, you are a really big rascal.

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-10-30 06:54 PM

This is too funny, I love it.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

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Canada

6 posted 2001-10-30 07:06 PM

*giggling* she will be delighted with this hot little poem. Well done.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-10-30 07:40 PM

Interloper!! I waited as patiently as I could and what do I get? ANTS!!! No more going on picnics with you...and I'll give the next on your list a can of Raid to take along. That's not fair!! The others had a great time with you!!

I know...

I'll cast a spell on you!!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

paladin

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since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

8 posted 2001-10-30 08:10 PM

Reminds me of a tryst in a bed of poison ivy.The wages of sin sometimes show that God has a sense of humor.

paladin

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

9 posted 2001-10-31 02:28 AM

Enchantress~ Hehe, didn't you notice? I got interrupted by a doorbell, Tracey - a Pastor, Mysteria - lightning, and now you got ants!

Don't you see? Our man has not been following through!

I do think you got the worst though

Interloper~ Now I can't wait to see what folly will get in the way next!

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

10 posted 2001-10-31 07:01 AM

Okay.....this one threw me....but a man has to protect himself from such lusty ladies! Especially when you have your hands full!

Don Juan De Marco...had to throw in something to skip to the next...right?

Sincerely
Regina

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

11 posted 2001-10-31 10:24 AM

Complaints? Why am I getting complaints? I cannot control all events in this world ... or can I

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

12 posted 2001-10-31 06:03 PM

you are such a tease

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

13 posted 2001-10-31 09:14 PM

Yes, you are a big tease, this was another fun read, and maybe you should picnic on the beach, where there are no ants LOL
Sandra
PS
I will keep my sword at home.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

14 posted 2001-11-01 04:46 PM

Better luck next time.

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29

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Texas

15 posted 2001-11-01 04:51 PM

and if you check the ants were inported from Texas. *S*

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

16 posted 2001-11-01 05:02 PM

Yup, Rusty, they were fire ants big enough to throw a saddle on...

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

17 posted 2001-11-01 06:13 PM

(giggles) Oh my gosh, this is hot indeed and quite a teaser! (sigh) Uh oh, Enchantress has a spell out upon you! (sigh) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03

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USA

18 posted 2001-11-01 08:21 PM

YOu have ants on your shorts!!!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

19 posted 2001-11-01 08:24 PM

Oh this is too cute. Yes, we're all getting our romance interrupted by the hands of fate (or should I say, the pen of Interloper!!!!)

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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