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SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2001-10-30 10:07 AM


So many times, I tried to talk to you
To tell you, how I was feeling inside
You threw it out, like you always do
Telling me that, it is all in my mind

You have no clue, what that did to me
Hearing all those things, you did say
All of those mean things, don't you see
Made me just want to ,,leave and go away

My heart is filled with so many tears
Tears I hold back, to keep from crying
You have given me way too many fears
Sometimes, I feel like not even trying

Always with others, you spend your time
Leaving me here day after day all alone
To be with me, you think it is a crime
Sometimes, I think about going home

No more can I tell you, how I feel inside
Cause, I remember, what you use to do
Things you called me stick in my mind
Remembering this, I keep it all from you

When you and I met, I opened up my heart
This is something that, was hard for sure
With you though, I wanted to have a new start
All you did was hurt me, like you did before

I’ve tried so hard to show my love to you
To accept my love, you’re just too busy
Pushing me away, like you always do
My stomach inside, just feel so queasy

All of those words you use to tell me
Just seems to stay inside my mind
And seem to be all untrue you see
Your love for me I no longer find

© By Sue 10/27/01


© Copyright 2001 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2001-10-30 10:13 AM




(big hugggssssssss) So sad and heartwrenching this poem is! (sad sigh) My heart cries out to your tears, and I pray with all my heart that you find true love very soon that is pure and honest and can bring you great joy! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you, sweet Sue! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 10-30-2001).]

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
2 posted 2001-10-30 10:23 AM


Thank you, Mistletoe Angel!
Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
3 posted 2001-10-30 10:26 AM


My heart goes out to you, dear one. How I wish you did not have to feel such pain. Words are very powerful. They can lift us up and give us complete and utter joy or they can tear us down leaving behind a person who is unsure of their own worth. I pray that you start to receive the kinds of words that will help you to know how very special and unique a person you are. ***hugs***

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

BtwnRockandHardPlace
Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 98
NJ, USA
4 posted 2001-10-30 10:34 AM


Sue,

I could have written this one myself.

Thank you.

*~*~*~*~
Benita
*~*~*~*~
The truth of the matter is that you always know the right thing to do. The hard part is doing it.
-Gen. Schwarzkoff

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818
USA
5 posted 2001-10-30 10:46 AM


throw his *** out and go after someone else    

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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