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wandering
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0 posted 2001-09-24 12:38 PM


Every night I see your smile
Every time I close my eyes
I've seen your face in a thousand dreams
And every place that I've been
I know I'll love you
Forever and ever
And all I need is you
Yes, all I need is you

Like grains of sand
Thrown in the wind
We don't know where to start
Where to begin
But I'll still love you
Forever and ever
And all I need is you
Yes, all I need is you,
Forever and ever.

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

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Tennessee Angel
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Tennessee
1 posted 2001-09-24 01:09 AM


Like grains of sand
thrown in the wind
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I think I might know that feeling.  Lovely piece.  

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-09-24 01:11 AM


Like the thoughts here...James
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-09-24 01:44 AM


Wandering~
Very nicely said~
~*Marge*~

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Sven
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4 posted 2001-09-24 08:41 PM


sounds like a song. . .

well told my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-09-24 08:48 PM


Enjoyed this I did....yes, I did!  

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

walker
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6 posted 2001-09-24 09:08 PM


Beautiful words, who wouldn't want to be loved like that?
Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2001-09-25 07:02 AM


This sounds as though a delightful melody should accompany these tender words Wandering ... very nicely done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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