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Fee
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since 2000-08-07
Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-10-27 09:05 PM


Broken Heart
Shattered Dreams
Scattered pieces of Life it seems.

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

© Copyright 2001 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
1 posted 2001-10-27 09:06 PM


oh, this hurts...    

so much feeling in so little words...

hope youre feeling better tomorrow    

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"what if jesus comes back like that..will he cry when he sees where our hearts are at?..." c.raye

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2001-10-27 09:10 PM


So much emotion
so few words.
Stay here awhile, it helps
ease the pain.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
3 posted 2001-10-27 09:10 PM


Oh gosh...my heart goes out to you. In a very few words you managed to convey deep pain. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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