Open Poetry #16 |
too dear to me.. |
dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
(found this in a coat pocket..another "abc" poem..) i cant give up on you... i cant. is that what causes this ache in my heart, or is it the fact that now i hesitate, and stifle my words? you are too dear to me to spit upon your name-- too much do i love you to give up on us my friend... whoever you are now-- whoever you are you'll always be part of me... and i cant give you up. ever... you slide into my world at unexpected moments-- and i fear the encounter as much as i long for it... -dgvarner for abc ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ "what if jesus comes back like that..will he cry when he sees where our hearts are at?..." c.raye [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 10-27-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
An emotion filled poem that speaks from the heart. I can relate very well to these feelings you have. Very well said. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Check your other coat pockets. I would like to see more like this. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
STARTIME..i thank you much for reading..i'm sorry you can relate... RUSTY KNIGHT..ROFL @ you...i'll let you know if i find anymore pocket treasures..lol thank you for reading.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes, The Knight is right, check those other pockets! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ Wonderful ~ I got a winter jacket out tonight and found a five-dollar bill in the pocket~ Ought to be a poem in there somewhere ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
there is no heart which should ever be given up..... so beautiful your words...... thank you for this piece....... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
MIDNITESUN..always good to check for treasures left from the last cold day... thanks for reading MARGIE..MONEY IS GOOD TOO!! wish i could find some of THAT in my pockets!! thanks for stopping in! DOREEN..i agree wholeheartedly..i hate losing people! and this one, i definately wont...things have chngd--may not be repairable..but i'll always be here when he wants to touch my world again.. hugs, g |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This sounds very familiar. Love the way you've written it. And I agree with the others, check the other pockets and see what falls out!! If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
g~ *sigh* very heartfelt piece...it must have been waiting in your pocket to be found again on a "rainy day" for reminiscing...it just *feels* like one of those poems, you know? Hehe...probably not...I don't know if that makes sense at all Well anyway, I enjoyed this poignant poem. Hugs, ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
TRACEY..i'm chking i'm chking! lol thank you so much for reading.. SMITTEN..yes..lol..it may have been waiting for its moment to shine.. glad you enjoyed it hugs, g |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, love the honest emotion in this piece. I hope you don't have to give up on your friend, he should always be there at least in spirit I would imagine... I must be out of touch, somehow, what's tha abc reference mean. Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PARKER..thanks for finding me! and i wont give up...i dont often give up on people... glad you enjoyed reading me.. LOL...the "abc" ref..my best friends initials.. i havent posted much for him lately..but there was a time when nearly everything i posted was for him..some are in the pub..one is in the "voices" book ("trembled") hugs, g |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
the only reason I can think of to give up (on) a friend is to keep them from being hurt.....this is so sad... -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I'm like the others, can't help but wonder what else you have in those pockets! Enjoyed the read my friend, take care! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
LADY OF SHALLOT..i'm not sure i'd give up even for that reason...maybe just pretend to, to keep them from hurt.. thanks for reading.. EAGLE..well...i'm REALLY hoping to find money in the next pockets!! thanks EAGLE hugs, g |
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