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Amused Cupid
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since 2001-10-24
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0 posted 2001-10-26 10:36 PM


Table Salt

A sprinkle here,
A dash there,
Table salt,
How do you fair?

A simple flair,
A seasoned affair,
Table salt,
Why do I care?

A desired stare,
A visual compare,
Table salt,
Would you like to share?

A textured millionaire,
A microscopic fare,
Table salt,
Are you in despair?

A grain aware,
An unhealthy scare,
Table salt,
I bow to you in prayer.


© Copyright 2001 Amused Cupid - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2001-10-26 10:41 PM


Revere the table salt - That's my kinda poem... Welcome to Passions, Amused one...

Check your email for a special greeting..

Magnus
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2 posted 2001-10-26 10:43 PM


A cute and seasoned well write...Thanx.
welcome to Passions.

Tracey
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3 posted 2001-10-26 10:52 PM


I love salt. I hear it's bad for you, but hey, ya only live once!!! Welcome to passions, we'll look forward to seeing more

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-10-26 10:52 PM



Love your first post Amused Cupid !!
Look forward to more from you!
     ~NancyLee~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
5 posted 2001-10-26 11:18 PM


Welcome to the family!! I look forward to reading more from you.  
Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2001-10-26 11:24 PM




YAY!!! I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) Yep, it's not good for any of us, but you must admit it's tempting! (smiles) Welcome to Passions, sweet cupid, may you be inspired by us all here as w ewill all be inspired by your lovely beautiful words! (big hugggsssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

may love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



Startime
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7 posted 2001-10-26 11:32 PM


*giggling* a very well seasoned poem. This poem is so uniquely different and I love it. BRAVO!!!Welcome to passions....I know you will love it here with all these wonderful and very loving poets. I will be watching for more of your work.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
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Phoenix, Az
8 posted 2001-10-26 11:39 PM


Welcome to Passions!
This is great! Love that table salt!
Hope you like it here!
Hugs
Cindi

Rodney Belcher
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Posts 227
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9 posted 2001-10-26 11:50 PM


A welcome from me too...and there IS something about that pristine salt shaker that draws you...ever...closer...lol

Lets Love one another and let God do the worrying,
Rodney

[This message has been edited by Rodney Belcher (edited 10-26-2001).]

Midnitesun
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Gaia
10 posted 2001-10-27 12:19 PM


OOps, My doctor just told me today to stay away from salty snacks...but your poem should be ok...Welcome to the blue pages.
Tiersdin
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11 posted 2001-10-27 12:46 PM


Ditto all of the above and a WARM welcome to "P*A*S*S*I*O*N*S"

Look forward to reading more of your work!

*smiles*

~Tier

BloomingRose
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12 posted 2001-10-27 07:27 AM


Welcome to Passion's!
A dash of salt seasons the day, thats for sure!

Deb  

Sunshine
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13 posted 2001-10-27 08:09 AM



Well, this seasoning brought a bit of flair to my table!  Welcome to Passions!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




DawnG
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14 posted 2001-10-27 01:53 PM


Amused Cupid,

Speaking as one who rarely uses table salt, this is a very cute poem. Welcome to Passions. I hope you enjoy it here.  

                             Dawn

vlraynes
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15 posted 2001-11-01 02:42 PM



Amused Cupid-
   Welcome to the Passions family.
   Oh...and pass the salt please.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky



  

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

SEA
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with you
16 posted 2001-11-01 07:19 PM


heehee, I love salt...   welcome  
Cerenity
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17 posted 2001-11-02 01:30 PM


Hi Amused Cupid,

Welcome to Passions,

Enjoyed this write very much and for sure looking forward to more of your work,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



The Rusty Knight
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Texas
18 posted 2001-11-02 04:47 PM


Let's see there is rock salt, table salt, sea salt,epson salt, iodized salt and finally a nice poem about salt.....WELCOME to passions.  Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

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