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RosePetal
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0 posted 2001-10-26 03:38 PM


Friday night has finally arrived
I hate mondays but on weekends I come alive
A hot date is coming for me tonight
Sometimes I'm a bit accident prone
But hopefully things will go allright
Should you arrive a little early?
Or a tad bit late?
You know women take extra time
Preparing for a date
but in the end
Aren't we always worth the wait?

I like to be spontaneous instead of precise
Minute by Minute rather than thinking twice
You kiss my lips of red rubies
Want to do the usual and catch a movie?
I know you happen to love action
high energy fight scences meet your satisfaction
I am more into the sappy love flicks
You refuse to see one of those
Claiming they're only for chicks
When it comes to movies, we never agree
We can go rent two for $8 and go home happy!

We could go rollerblading in the park
Unless ofcourse you are scared of the dark
It's good exercise to keep the legs strong
If it doesn't rain I could blade all night long

If you want we can shoot some hoops
One on one, we don't need to have groups
Aww baby don't be ashamed
It might've been luck last time
When I beat you at your game!

We can go over to the arcade
There are many games to be played
You play those racing games so intently
I play them rather calm
Hey let's go to a fortune teller
And let her read our palms
Or we can call that psychic Miss Cleo
See if she can tell us what we want to know
They claim the first three minutes are free
She better talk fast
To make a believer out of me!

How about we go test drive some fast sports cars?
Or maybe a stroll on the beach admiring the stars?
We can have a few drinks and shoot some pool
Or get a bit brave and go for a tattoo?
We can watch a live band perform on stage
Wait, scratch the few drinks idea
I forgot I'm still Underage!

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 10-26-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-10-26 03:48 PM


Cute and not very far from real life, huh?  You forgot swimming, singing, dreaming out loud, and, should I say it? ... parking

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

RosePetal
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2 posted 2001-10-26 03:54 PM


I knew I'd forget some stuff hehehe
Well...let him surprise me : )

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3 posted 2001-10-26 05:08 PM




(sigh) Sounds like a lot of fun! (smiles) Fridays are always such wonderful days to spend times with your loved ones! (smiles) You're so cute, sweet Joanna, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



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4 posted 2001-10-26 05:12 PM


Great write!  Have fun tonight and a wonderful weekend!  ~Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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5 posted 2001-10-26 09:10 PM


I enjoy reading your words...always so alive
and witty.  Full of so many different thoughts.

Thanx...

PS..who wins at Bball?

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6 posted 2001-10-29 01:08 AM


Sounds a bit like a weekend that we could have together Rosepetal.... maybe,...  loved the poem.. keep it up

Domzi
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7 posted 2001-10-29 02:36 AM


I hope your Friday night was exciting! You wrote a lot about what guys like...sometimes it's hard for a guy and a girl to come to an aggreement! Enjoy yourself!

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

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8 posted 2001-10-29 07:31 AM


I love this one. I'm one of those who on Monday is already planning for Friday, that's my main goal(in life) Great options here.
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