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Going To Rio
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Going To Rio |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“GOING TO RIO” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I’m going to RIO, because I know that you are there, I’ll be there soon, arriving, when the sun goes down… We’ll hold each other tight, and hear the rhythm play, as we dance into the night, all the way crosstown… Seeing you I reach out, your hand touches mine, the music plays, and my hands, feel your hips start to sway… Your eyes speak to me, and when they look at mine, they sing like your voice, and I give my heart away… Whispers of romance, underneath the moonlit sky, tender I feel the softness of you, when we dance… The warm air sings a melody, rhythm is in the air, both knowing its delight, and both are enhanced… Together we are, way down south, just you and I, the music sings, and passions, are the appetites… Moist lips they touch, knowing once more elation, just dance with me in RIO, and you’ll be mine tonight… Dance with me baby, dance with me, in RIO, and I’ll be yours, this night… ~~~~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You must surely have a wonderful melody to compliment these lovely sentiments Bill ... very nicely done.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love it BC. . . one of your best my friend. . . I can hear the music now. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
How romantic,Bill! Have a great time! Cor |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
BC I can hear the notes in my head. Music of the islands - enjoyed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I could use some Rio time...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kit - ah yes, a melody I have done for this one. Thank you for your thoughts. Sven - thank you for reading this, and for your reply, always welcome my friend.. Corinne - someday I would go on this trip to RIO, but now I can dream about it... Thanks Corinne. Ariana - music of the islands indeed. Still working on it, but it's getting better. Thank you for your words. Hope that you are well... JamesMichael - tell you what James, I'll meet you there, and buy you a bahama mama.. One for you, and one for me... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Put on those DANCIN' shoes...  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
CHA CHA CHA....ha..loved it bill ~Victoria~ |
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