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Abigaile
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0 posted 2001-10-26 12:05 PM


Maybe I love him
but we’ll never know.
I’ll hide in our friendship
and wonder my little thoughts.
He went away to be a man.
Here I sit writing my letters
disguising my doubts
with countless passing men.
We’re supposed to be friends,
that’s probably all we’ll ever be,
but I’ll still be here with my look,
and wonder my little thoughts.

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

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1 posted 2001-10-26 12:06 PM


o yuh nice
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-10-26 12:28 PM


maybe you love him
wonder in your thoughts a while
the answer will come

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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3 posted 2001-10-26 12:32 PM


Abigaile,
My life is full of little thoughts. Enjoyed

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4 posted 2001-10-26 12:34 PM



Little thoughts may just lead to wonderfully large surprises...

Abigaile
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5 posted 2001-10-26 01:23 PM


Thank you everyone. Actually, these "little thoughts" have been cleared. This is an older poem that I decided to share. But thank you all for your kind words. *SMILE*

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

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6 posted 2001-10-27 07:13 PM




(sigh) Such little thoughts always have such beauty and value to them! (big hugggsssss) Your golden heart shines with them! (sigh) God Bless You, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


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7 posted 2001-10-27 07:42 PM


*giggling* well I am glad that is cleared up and I hope it turned out in a way that made you smile. Wonderful thoughts you have shared with us today.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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