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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2001-10-24 08:02 PM


Sunshine
~~~


As droplets cling fast to an icicle
their silent plea echoes
in vain
A mist
gently lifts
as the blade reaps the sun
And a tear
wets the earth
once again
~~~



© Copyright 2001 Rex Allen McCoy - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2001-10-24 08:05 PM


o yuh a nice write
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2 posted 2001-10-24 08:06 PM




(smiles) Oh Rex, you've done it again, your beautiful visions glisten right before my eyes! (sigh) I saw the icicles melting softly in joy as the sunshine blessed all of nature around and it wept tears of joy that blanket the ground! (smiles) You always make me smile with your beautiful words! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rex, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-10-24 08:08 PM


Oh Rex!!  You know how I love these short and to the point beautiful ones!!  This one is terrific!  I'm keeping it....Nancy.

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Startime
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4 posted 2001-10-24 09:33 PM


Stunning is the only word I can come up with to tell how this poem makes me feel. I flowed through the vision of it and loved the whole thing. BRAVO!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2001-10-24 09:44 PM



Leaving poets smiling, are you?


The Lady of Shallot
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6 posted 2001-10-24 10:28 PM




very warm!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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