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Alan
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0 posted 2001-09-22 10:52 PM


Slow floating brown leaves
Cool autumn breeze shaking limbs
Squirrels gather nuts

This year’s autumn starts
Bringing on the beginning
Of winter’s cold start

alan


© Copyright 2001 Alan - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-09-22 10:55 PM


Nice one Alan!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Alan
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2 posted 2001-09-22 11:05 PM


thanks enchantress
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3 posted 2001-09-23 12:15 PM


Alan~

Squirrels scurrying
Banking fall's harvested goods
Eats through the winter


*You did yours PERFECTLY~
And inspirationally~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Tracey
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4 posted 2001-09-23 12:19 PM


I WANT SUMMER BACK!!!!

Nice poem though

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Alan
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5 posted 2001-09-23 12:49 PM


Thank you Marge..I have only written a couple of them.

Tracey....so do I...I hate winter time

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6 posted 2001-09-23 12:56 PM


no you sillies   this is the very best time of the year.....it's sunggle~cozy time, besides, my birthday is in November   I live for Fall and the change it brings and let's not forget the glorious rain  

Alan, this is beautiful  

Alan
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7 posted 2001-09-23 01:10 AM


November what SEA...mine is in DEC....I still don't like it
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8 posted 2001-09-23 01:20 AM


11-14  
when is yours?
I like December enough for the both of us  

Alan
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9 posted 2001-09-23 01:23 AM


christmas...email me ok

[This message has been edited by Alan (edited 09-23-2001).]

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10 posted 2001-09-23 01:25 AM


that is wonderful
did they seperate it from Christmas for you??
I would.....
my dad's is on Thanksgiving a lot......it was last year

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