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SEA
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0 posted 2001-09-22 06:53 PM




Sky singing
Tapping toes
Outside ovation
Rambunctious rumbling
Moist minuet
Yonder yearnings

Wistful wanting
Edgy echoes
Accumulating accompaniment
Theatrical thunder
Heavy humidity
Effusive electricity
Resounding rain


~SEA~


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SmittenKitten
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1 posted 2001-09-22 07:25 PM



WOW!  


Very immpressive    you sure know how to describe a storm!

Hugs,
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Enchantress
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2 posted 2001-09-22 07:27 PM


SEA...You are sooo clever girl!!  
Topheth will love this!!  Just as the rest of us do!    

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Corinne
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3 posted 2001-09-22 07:35 PM


This is great, SEA!

Cor

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4 posted 2001-09-22 07:57 PM


makes me crave the thunder.
Topheth
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5 posted 2001-09-22 08:03 PM


Oh yes, Enchantress is correct, I find it very delightful.  'Outside ovation' makes one wonder what's being played inside.  Hehe.
And 'wistful wanting' and 'edgy echoes' resonates emotionally with me.  I'm a sap.

Humbly,
Jeph.

SEA
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6 posted 2001-09-22 08:50 PM


thank you all for liking this one, and Jeph, I tried.....I am happy you liked this.  
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