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The Lonely Stranger
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Upstate, NY, USA

0 posted 2001-09-22 04:00 PM


Lakefront air,
Windblown hair.

Sparkling eyes,
Blazing skies.

Mournful Terns,
Sunset burns.

Pulses race,
Warm embrace.

Dimming light,
Coming night.

Heart afire,
Deep desire.

Standard end,
Only friends.

No one ever listened themselves into trouble.

© Copyright 2001 Gerald H. Monroe - All Rights Reserved
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
1 posted 2001-09-22 05:47 PM


Another postulant pursuit that ends in a sigh ... perhaps tomorrow
Enjoyed this very much

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2001-09-22 05:52 PM


these are great.
I don't know if I'll be able to narrow mine down this good.....but I know I'll try  

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 09-22-2001).]

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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Netherlands
3 posted 2001-09-22 06:29 PM


Like them, they're great

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2001-09-22 07:04 PM


LonelyStranger~
These are quite lovely thoughts~
Nicely done~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-09-22 07:18 PM


Ah Lonely Stranger....I was hoping for a happy sexy ending...maybe next time.  Well done!!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20
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where the sky and horizon meet
6 posted 2001-09-22 07:22 PM



LonelyStranger~ Well it had the makings of being a successful evening!  Still though, another friend isn't so bad    

Hugs,
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

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