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RosePetal
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0 posted 2001-10-19 01:57 AM


One Night
You're so far out of my reach it seems
I wanna spend an entire night with you
To get behind the scenes
I think of you
when the night slows
No one has any suspicions
of how much my curiousity grows

Just one night with you
Is all I can ask
It would be my dream come true
Though a night doesn't last

Just one night with you
Is all it would take
To make you want to be with me
and start a romance we'd never forsake

One night would have to do
If I couldnt have more time with you
As sad as I would end up
I'd have to make one night be enough
And as tough as it might be
Nothing can stop my dreams of you nightly

When it's all over, you wont be far behind
Everyday I'd replay our adventure in my mind
Yes, there are downfalls to having fun
It would make me want you next to me
when tomorrow comes
But you'd probably just love me then run
Or would you stay with me through the day
just like the sun?
If you went away
would you return to my arms another day?
I have a spare bedroom
you dont have to go anytime soon....

© Copyright 2001 Joanna - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2001-10-19 02:10 AM


Well now...don't assume too much.  Oh the fantasy.
Startime
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2 posted 2001-10-19 08:51 AM


WOW!!!!Now that's a warm invitation if I have ever heard one. *grin* I hope this fantasy comes true. Well done.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-10-19 03:55 PM


just a one night stand
breeding ground of deep despair
that's a lot to risk

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Domzi
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4 posted 2001-10-19 04:26 PM


Wow, girl!
This poem sounds very
passionate and sensual.
I wonder if your fantasy
will come true.
Keep doing your thang!

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-10-20 05:47 AM


I have thought along these lines many times...James
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