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walker
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0 posted 2001-09-22 10:07 AM



In a quiet space in the night
you held me so tight
Reassuring me with your touch
This has to be right
Kissing my fears away
Trembling
I opened up
let you in
Gave you
all that is needed to love.


© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2001-09-22 12:20 PM


*sigh*

this is wonderful

Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2001-09-22 12:52 PM


This is beautiful Walker ... you've captured a trust and innocence in this lovely piece, nicely done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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3 posted 2001-09-22 02:16 PM


Walker~
Very nice~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-09-22 02:35 PM


Enjoy this style of poem very much...James
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-09-22 04:27 PM


Walker, this is lovely...very comforting.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Duncan
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6 posted 2001-09-23 12:29 PM


The way it should be.  With no charge for refills.
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