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The Personal Touch
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The Personal Touch |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Personal Touch Why do I take you so personally? Like a bridegroom waiting evenings bed. Like a thirsty man near to dead Like a randy dragon dramatically You paint my wings such colored hew Glowing in the mornings light Banishing my thoughts of night Soothing me with nectars dew. Can’t you see my eyes aglow? Following your every lead A beggars bowl in full need A calming drink of old crow How long can I bath this sun? How long can I swathe its store? The ghost of time opens its door And when I pass it will be done. Why do I take you literally? Like a randy dragon rascally |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You paint my wings such colored hew Glowing in the mornings light Banishing my thoughts of night Soothing me with nectars dew. Can’t you see my eyes aglow? Following your every lead A beggars bowl in full need A calming drink of old crow How long can I bath this sun? How long can I swathe its store? The ghost of time opens its door And when I pass it will be done. Why do I take you literally? Like a randy dragon rascally ====================================== Wise men tell us ... "why ask why" question not ... the suns gift to the sky Wonder not ... the tides on sands of time Ponder not ... the reason behind a poets rhyme But if thee takes the words to heart ... literally ... Then thee knows that each one ... is kissed with sincerety. *winkiewinkie*    me    Well tomorrow holds only mystery |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I really enjoyed this Sy (I will forever think of you as that dragon now!)  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'Why do I take you literally?' Well ... you'd better !  Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I forgot to say.... I am so diggin that Randy Dandy rhyme scheme you dressed this one up in!! Have I ever mentioned how sexy it is when a poet plays with his poetry  LOL   ROFL  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
An excellent write Sy ... I very much enjoyed the rhyme scheme, it flowed perfectly with your sentiments, very well done!  Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 09-22-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If you get any randier I'll have to bring the Maalox! So enjoyed this play! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sweet Tinkerbell, You are wiser than I. Love PoetdeVine, Beautiful comment. *L* Marge, I do, love and hugs back. JM, Well I'll see what else I can do. WWS Kit, We are simpatico. *L* Sunshine, Don't need the maalox, just keep shining *L* |
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