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0 posted 2001-10-17 10:01 PM




Will I
By: Noah Eaton
9/21/01

Will I ever be able to hold true love?
Will I be able to live to see you?
Will I live to experience a magical day
When I join your loving hand in marriage, me and you?

Will I have the chance to find my dreams
Within a world of saddened hope and where hatred flourishes?
Will I be alive to live life to the fullest
And always love all the wonderful meadowlarks I cherish?

Will I feel loves first kiss from your sweet lips
Someday before I embrace Heaven's Gate
Will I grow to see a renewed joy among us all?
Not overwhelmed by desperate fate?

Will I live to find true love
Someday before I die?
Will I ever feel your heart beat against mine?
Will I...?



© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-17 10:28 PM


Noah - Be patient - you will. Very well written. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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2 posted 2001-10-17 10:34 PM


These are strange and terrifying times that we are living in. Who can truly say what tomorrow will bring? I pray for a brighter safer world for all of us. (((HUGS)))
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3 posted 2001-10-18 07:34 AM


Yes you will because even though hese are bad times we survive, adapt and carry on becoming better. Make a plan for love and pursue it.
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4 posted 2001-10-18 08:00 AM


Noah,

    With such a tender soul and romantic loving heart, I can almost promise you you will find love. Be patient.. the day will come and it will be worth the wait. Beautifully expressed.. I love this one.

Tara

I need a darn quote. *chuckles*

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5 posted 2001-10-18 09:20 AM



Absolutely!  You sound as if you are breaching a threshold in time....give it wing, and you shall fly...

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6 posted 2001-10-18 12:49 PM


Noah,
Patience is the key to love...don't give up on it...time will tell, I wish you luck!  
Hugs
Cindi

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