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It Was Marvelous!
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It Was Marvelous! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
It Was Marvelous! seven days six nights before All Hallows’ Eve we met deep in the forest at the great stone table trees whispered secrets owls serenaded la luna worms set up parades through the forest floor already it was the magical time weaving promises of frightful, alluring fantasy Gable and I peered into the margolis bowl hoping to see mystery while Serenata waited patiently for our eyes to perceive we were not disappointed... there, in the bowl, magic was woven oh, that you could see, it would be an exciting pleasure, yet, as you cannot, I know it is impossible for you to understand or believe what we saw. So I shall make no attempt to explain nor describe, just know, it was marvelous! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. [This message has been edited by VAS (edited 10-17-2001).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
but you did you did! |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
ah, yes my favorite season and one of my favorite words "marvelous!" thank you! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Virginia! Where HAVE you been!? Welcome home! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you all, and Sunshine, I've come in intermittently over the past few weeks. Fortunately, I've been kept really busy subbing. Also, it seems that people might be less tired of my poetry popping up since it pops up much less these days. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
VAS- oooooh, take me to the forest with you next time please?!! Very good. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
And the vision was MARVELOUS...I can relate. I get lost in visions when I am gazing at a star filled sky with all its magic and mystery. BRAVO!!!I LOVE IT. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
It does sound marvelous!  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Virginia! YES it was, and is...MARVELOUS!! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Glad to see you back Virginia Must have been a marvellous experience, great poem. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
pure fantasy! it is a response to a challenge to write to a painting, see the painting by locating "October Painting Challenge of the Month" at www.voy.com/1001. You'll need to use Internet Explorer, Netscape won't work. Click on the above subject...you'll have to scroll down quite a ways to find it. Then click on Painting Challenge, then on October 2001 and then I think you'll be there. Thank you all for your words of encouragement. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
To think I almost misssed this. Nicely done and an enjoyable read, Virginia  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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