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Open Poetry #16

Crackles

WRBreezin
Member

since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

0 posted 2001-10-16 07:29 AM

Crackles

Of emptiness I suffer nothing
shallow pools compare
still with no motion
But of your presence aware
I have an army to slay
constant marching
upon the memories weight
Liberty loves justice
but for all she bears no torch
Night crackles in the sounds
as the first wave fans out
their battle cry clear and engaging
"Love Never Forgives"

Willie
©2001

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

1 posted 2001-10-16 07:51 AM

Strong! Very moving verse. I need that army sometimes to engage against my own inner battles

Your writing is very unique and fresh. I highly enjoy the depth and perception of our twisted normalcy. Superb!

Sincerely,
Regina

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-10-16 09:45 AM

I very interesting look at love and that made for a very interesting read. I feel sad that you find love, unforgiving. Very well written, bringing your vision to life easily. Thank you, so much, for sharing it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

3 posted 2001-10-16 10:57 AM

I've been on both sides of that fence....

Well done, Willie....

WRBreezin
Member

since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

4 posted 2001-10-17 06:27 AM

Regina, Startime, Decaflame

Thanks for taking a look at "Crackles"
Your comments are appreciated!

Willie B

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