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Satin Laces, Pretty Faces
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Satin Laces, Pretty Faces |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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This is a poem story....enjoy Satin laces, pretty faces and a glass of wine.... Fine things on a sunny afternoon. Lying in the sun, soaking rays, golden brown Turnover, now the other side.... The view.....simply Mahvelus......oh yes.... Bikinis, should never be called bikinis, better described as micro skinnies.... How can a body be covered and have so little. Lotion, just a little, don’t want to look like a sand crab. Watching the girls go by......dum dee dee, dum dum....doo dah... Never could keep a tune........WHOAAAAAA. I see her walkin’ down the beach, (singing in my mind) The most gorgeous goddess of the street......Oh yeah..... Hips, keeping time to my eyeballs, shoulders that a waterfall could caress endlessly Eyes that pulverize your brain into cream of wheat. A smile so bright I had to wear my shades.... Whewwwww. I cannot believe this sight, so perfect. Silhouetted by the falling sun.....a figure so divine. My heart would have stopped if not for beating my chest in. My lungs desiring to scream lustfully for this babe. My eyes, now lying in the sand beneath my feet, My hands, trembling to the tune of a machine gun. The rush I felt, from the tip of my toes to the tip of... My hair follicles on the top of my balding head. My tongue hanging down out of my mouth, step on it. Drool falling from my yearning lips, how slovenly... Wipe the drool, put back the shades, sit back, Watch her move.... Babbling incoherently, I cannot even speak.... The suntan oil has spilled in my lap, disgusting... I look like I wet myself....... Geeeeeez, what will I do when she sees me... Sand, lots of sand....bury myself in the hole, lie still... I’M BACK.....as he once said....now.....just wait.... I can feel the ground murmuring it’s own delight. The sand getting to cop a feel of delicate toes. The water lapping at slim ankles, teasing...I cry in jealousy... The air coursing over every curve....stirring a chilled skin the rays of sun, uncovering all that cannot be seen by eyes. A moon, lying low on a distant horizon, waiting to share a smooth thigh. Birds of all season flying overhead, crashing recklessly while gazing... Lying there, I look heavenward into the eyes of the worlds most great wonder. They see mine, I see them reflect into me, I feel them in my soul.... They are saying something.....I cannot catch the words..... Got it.......Now I have the words.... Oh Mannnnnn......... “Eat your heart out” Slowly I sink into the sand, devoured by wise eyes, spat out as mere food for the birds, them still gazing as I scatter over the landscape. Silhouetted love on sand departs into the blue of day... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*giggling*...... this is great  |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
This poem is tight! Whoa! As my borough has always stated- Do or Die. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Susan, I thought you might get a chuckle out of this....thanx. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Domzi....glad you enjoyed the read....a little humor is always fun.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Magnus! This is way too cool!  And funny!!  Very well done and enjoyed soooo very much!! ~Nancy~~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy, I am happy that I have given you some humor for the day....Get your thoughts composed for the evening. Thanx for your words. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Magnus, you've got me smiling big here I loved it.Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, I get a chuckle out of this myself, even though I wrote it....I was in a silly mood when I put the pen to paper. thanx Dee.. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* this is wickedly delightful. I love it...Very well done. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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