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0 posted 2001-10-14 08:26 PM


Mother, If I

Mother, if I could tell you.
If I could only say the words.
I would.

I would  tell you I love you,
that I thank you for all you have done.
That, even  though I didn’t often say it.
I would  thank you as your number one Son.

You were there each  moment
of the many times I did  need.
Each time that I struggled.
Each time a wound did bleed.

You have always loved  me.
You have always said you would.
You were forever  there for me
You comforted  me as much as you could.

I leave you now smiling
Knowing that your love I keep.
I say goodbye while seeing
you watch  me peacefully sleep.

This is the second one I read.  It is from Him (my
departed Brother In Law) to his mother.


© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-14 08:42 PM


*sigh* I am sure that his mother was brought to tears by these heartfelt words. You have a way with your words of touching the heart deeply...again you brought me to tears. Thank you, dear one, for sharing this wonderful tribute to him. Your love for him shines brightly in your words.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-10-14 08:43 PM


Yes,  I loved him much.  I had my moments
at times, but....in the end...he was very
much part of our family,  my brother.
Thank you Star.

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