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Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2001-10-13 03:10 PM

Commitment
AMK
October 13, 2001

She's not in this for a fleeting moment
No, she's in this for the long run
She's so tired of falling in and out of love
Eagerly she embraces this new love that's begun

Hope is in her heart
There is a new light in her eye
She listens to her lover's heartbeat
As she gets lost in their sigh

She traces the contour of their face
As she opens her heart and more
And as God as her witness
She's never loved like this before

This love she feels is different
It's deeper and more true
No more tears of sadness does she cry
No more clouds of blue

She puts the past up on a shelf
As she embraces tommorrow
Her heart now filled with only joy and love
Out the window goes the last traces of sorrow

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 10-13-2001).]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-13 03:16 PM

*giggling* yes, It sure sounds like you are in love to me. Hold on tight and let it take you to the highest mountain peaks of your dreams. I loved the way this poem made me feel. Delightful.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2001-10-13 05:15 PM

Wahooo Amy, soar baby, soar!

Avsolutely lovely m'dear

Maree

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-10-13 05:48 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Amy, this is sooooooo beautiful I cried through it! (smiles) I dream of making a girl happy in the future, and I dream of loving her just like this! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet Amy, I wish you this kind of special love always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2001-10-13 06:18 PM

Woo hoo, I'm so happy for you, Amy-girlie

This is lovely and moving, the flow, rhyme, and sentiment is wonderful, you write your heart well.
I'm still searching for my one true love, but, I'm glad that you have found yours...and the result is beauty from your pen

Keep in touch~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

5 posted 2001-10-13 06:20 PM

Enjoyed! Isn't love grand?

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2001-10-14 11:21 AM

She traces the contour of their face
As she opens her heart and more
And as God as her witness
She's never loved like this before

This love she feels is different
It's deeper and more true
No more tears of sadness does she cry
No more clouds of blue

She puts the past up on a shelf
As she embraces tommorrow
Her heart now filled with only joy and love
Out the window goes the last traces of sorrow
==================================

one of your best Amy...
beautiful cadence kissed promise of better days.

This distance has shown how the road remains alone
Now I'm looking in my life ... for a truth that is my own.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-10-14 02:47 PM

ah yes. . . the magic of it all my friend. . .

and it shows in this. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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