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wandering
Member

since 2001-01-21

Posts 92

0 posted 2001-09-21 06:57 PM

Her eyes are the soft gray of morning shadows,
Tinted with blue and green
Like the placid reflections of peaceful waters,
Caressed by a summer breeze.
She has a lingering smile,
Which captivates,
Entices the heart.
Her accent is sweet
And southern,
A pure delight to the ears.
Near her I feel the warmth
That radiates from within,
As soothing as the Florida sun.
And I wonder,
What it would be like to hold her.

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-09-21 07:01 PM

And now I wonder too...James

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-09-21 07:21 PM

Very gently told...lovely write. Enjoyed.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-09-21 07:24 PM

Beautiful Wandering ... a delicate and tender read, much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 09-21-2001).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2001-09-21 07:33 PM

Wondering,
I wonder too, Nice write.

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

5 posted 2001-09-21 08:21 PM

Well you have to try then won't you

Very nice poem

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-09-21 10:15 PM

Wandering~

'Her eyes are the soft gray of morning shadows,
Tinted with blue and green
Like the placid reflections of peaceful waters,
Caressed by a summer breeze.'

A vision of beauty you've word-painted~
Very nicely done~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-09-22 04:38 PM

Still wondering...James

wandering
Member

since 2001-01-21

Posts 92

8 posted 2001-09-24 12:23 PM

I'm still wondering too james

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

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