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amigo
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 520
the earth school

0 posted 2001-10-12 01:24 PM

this was our world trade center,
which made people surrender
to the beauty of this engineering wonder,
but,at times with a lurking danger
that someday, someone might shatter
this great twin tower center.

came Tuesday of 2001, 11th September,
a day full of horror & terror,
'cause, there was this perpetrator
who gave the fateful order
for the most dreaded disaster....
people ran helter-skelter,
stricken with anger, panic & fear,
holding onto their lives dear
praying & hoping for loved ones - near & dear

i am just an onlooker,
a helpless by-stander,
filled with a grim wonder..
is this a life in perfect order?
is this world in perfect order?

all said & done, i continue my prayer
for all souls - victim and survivor,
each, someone's father, mother or brother,
or looking to find their peer,
i also pray for the ever growing number
of firefighters, workers & volunteers
to join hands & work together
to emerge out more stronger, richer
and strive to make the world safer & better

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-10-12 01:37 PM

Welcome!

this echoes so many hearts.....this is a great first post

will watch for more from you

~SEA

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-10-12 01:43 PM

many have felt this way..helpless and just an onlooker..your words are felt

((hugsss)) to you and Welcome

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-10-12 02:00 PM

Welcome to Passions! You will hopefully be delightfully amazed at the number of people who will echo your sentiments!

Please check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-10-12 02:07 PM

i am just an onlooker,
a helpless by-stander,
filled with a grim wonder..
is this a life in perfect order?
is this world in perfect order?

all said & done, i continue my prayer
for all souls - victim and survivor,
each, someone's father, mother or brother,
or looking to find their peer,
i also pray for the ever growing number
of firefighters, workers & volunteers
to join hands & work together
to emerge out more stronger, richer
and strive to make the world safer & better
======================

yes...we are all one on this...
welcome to Poetry Land amigo...
your cadence and message is wonderful
so nice to have you here with us

jm

When your own emptiness is all that's getting through
There comes a point when you're not sure why you're still talking
I passed that point long ago

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-10-12 02:09 PM

Great first write Amigo!!

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!

~NancyLee~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

amigo
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 520
the earth school

6 posted 2001-10-12 02:41 PM

thank you sea, nakdthoughts, sunshine, janet marie & enchantress - you are all amazing, this is such a great encouragement for the first timer..thank you again

luv & peace to all

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

7 posted 2001-10-12 06:57 PM

Nice one! Welcome to Passions, and it is very nice to meet you amigo.

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

8 posted 2001-10-13 05:06 PM

Your heartfelt feelings are reflected perfectly in this powerful poem. Truly our world, as we knew it, will never be the same. Keep writing. Your poem is wonderfully written. You are well able to say that which we all feel deeply. Well done.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.
http://www.powerpoems.com

amigo
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 520
the earth school

9 posted 2001-10-14 04:23 PM

Thank you Marie....nice to meet you too.

Startime...thank you, it is indeed heartfelt..glad you liked it.

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